From 71efcfadf79f8446c6544f91bf830666ec476441 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andre Henriques <andre.henriques@cern.ch>
Date: Mon, 30 Nov 2020 09:37:09 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] update quick guide (following feedback from James)

(cherry picked from commit 2b77374962650175801f5444c4f6221e1274cd5f)
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 cara/apps/calculator/templates/calculator.form.html.j2 | 10 +++++-----
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diff --git a/cara/apps/calculator/templates/calculator.form.html.j2 b/cara/apps/calculator/templates/calculator.form.html.j2
index 3e12229a..9cd8b703 100644
--- a/cara/apps/calculator/templates/calculator.form.html.j2
+++ b/cara/apps/calculator/templates/calculator.form.html.j2
@@ -205,8 +205,8 @@
 
 <div style="width: 33%; float:left;">
 
-  <b>Quick Guide:</b><br>
-  This tool simulates the long range airborne spread SARS-CoV-2 virus in a finite volume and estimates the risk of COVID-19 infection. It is based on current scientific data and can be used to measures the effectiveness of different mitigation measures.<br>
+  <b>Quick Guide - CARA Calculator App:</b><br>
+  This tool simulates the long range airborne spread SARS-CoV-2 virus in a finite volume and estimates the risk of COVID-19 infection. It is based on current scientific data and can be used to compare the effectiveness of different mitigation measures.<br>
   <b>Ventilation data:</b> <br>
   <ul>
     <li>Mechanical ventilation = check the rates with a specialist.</li>
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
     </ul>
   </ul>
   <b>Activity types:</b><br>
-  The type of activity that includes both the infected and exposed persons:
+  The type of activity applies to both the infected and exposed persons:
   <ul>
     <li>Office = Typical office scenario with all persons seated, in conversation (talking 33% of the time, otherwise breathing normally).</li>
     <li>Meeting = Typical meeting scenario with all persons seated, in conversation (talking time is shared equally between all persons).</li>
@@ -233,9 +233,9 @@
   </ul>
   <b>Activity breaks:</b><br>
   <ul>
-    <li>If coffee breaks are included, they are spread out evenly throughout the day, in addition to lunch.</li>
+    <li>If coffee breaks are included, they are spread out evenly throughout the day, in addition to any lunch break (if applicable).</li>
   </ul>
-  Refer to <a href="/calculator/user-guide"> COVID Calculator user-guide </a> for more detailed explanations on how to use this tool. <br>
+  Refer to <a href="/calculator/user-guide"> COVID Calculator App user guide </a> for more detailed explanations on how to use this tool. <br>
 </div>
 
 <button type='submit' id="generate_report">Generate report</button><br><br><br><br>