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 # Software Installation
-This 'make' resource requires a lot of additional library software. You will need to be connected to the internet to install these extra libraries.
+This resource requires a number of additional software libraries. You will need to be connected to the internet to install these extra libraries.
 
-To install the software you need, run the following commands in the terminal:
+To install the software you need, run the following commands in a terminal window:
 
 ```bash
 sudo apt-get install python3-picamera python3-pip
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ sudo pip3 install twython
 sudo apt-get install python-PIL
 ```
 
-This will install the necessary software to control the PiCamera, create a GUI, tweet and manipulate images.
+This will install the necessary software to control the Camera Module, create a GUI, and tweet and manipulate images.
 
-If you are using the Raspberry Pi touch screen to make this resource, you will also need to enter the following commands:
+If you are using the Raspberry Pi touchscreen to make this resource, you will also need to enter the following commands:
 
 ```bash
 sudo apt-get update